What
dose sustainability and buying/eating local mean to you? Draw from personal
experience/incorporate personal anecdote if possible.
In my opinion, sustainability is the
capability to protect the environment, limit unnecessary waste, and benefit the
next generation. Sustainability is important in modern world as resources are
limited while population continues to grow rapidly. Sustainability is something
we can all reach.
To buy and eat locally is one easy
way to be sustainable. To buy locally means to purchase food and fruits from
surrounding farms; and to eat locally means to eat in restaurants which use
local ingredients. To buy and eat locally can not only support local farmers
but also reduce the use of vehicles for transportation as well as emission of carbon
dioxide. Buying locally may sometimes costs more, but in return, we usually get
fresher food and make contribution to the economy of the region we live in. To
me, in additionally, eating locally is a joy. In Guangdong, China, different
rural areas have different signature dishes. Thus, eating locally in different
places is a great adventure, and I usually encounter delicious food
unexpectedly in different local restaurants.
Nice job. This revised version is better organized (good paragraph division), and you include more specific details that serve as evidence for your claims.
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