Reflection on Blog Post Drafts
Nov. 9th 2016

From the peer review in class today, I received following suggestions regarding my blog posts:

1. add a concluding sentence at the end of the article to connect all the contents together.
2. give examples or explain more thoroughly for a few arguments.
3. pay attention to the word choice

In general, I think these are all great suggestions. I am going to add supporting evidence and concise conclusions for my blog posts. I will also refine my word choice to clarify some sentences.